Show not tell
I must use
- my 5 senses.
- adjectives
- precise verbs
- figurative language- personification,metaphors,simile, hyperbole, alliteration
Many cracks filled the air and the sky was cloaked with the stunning colors. The crowd just went silent from the utter satisfaction. The glittering sparkles shone brightly as they started to vanish into thin air. The explosions deafened everyone in the crowd. The air was filled with smoke and crackles just kept going as people's eyes glared at each other. The sparkles looked like a spiderweb feasting on the darkness of the sky. The smoke spread through the whole crowd, right into my mouth.
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