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At technology A few kids and I have been sent to different learning areas to learn more things.

Kanoa Lloyd

Yesterday a nice lady named Kanoa Lloyd and a gentleman came to present her to our lass, both of them a weather presenters. You may find her and him on channel 3, News Hub. She came to greet the book recipients and to take a photo. The winners were me, Huntah and Heather. Taking a photo with a weather presenter was a new experience for me. I have to say I like News Hub.

Olympic Athlete

Success criteria:

• Precise verbs
• Correct structure

2016 Olympic games - Athletics

DING DING DING….. My alarm sets off muzzling my ears, I slam the reset button and dash into the bathroom for a refreshing hot shower. After I finished I forged thru the door and packed for the Rio Olympics 2016. Then I stormed outside with my luggage and yelled “TAXI!”As soon as I departed at the airport I gradually ask for help with all my luggage. I rushed to my private jet and swooped to the Rio Olympics 2016 in a flash. I ask for my best breakfast meal, pancakes after eating that I felt pumped.

When I approached the door I was getting ready for my dramatic exit. The door had a jammed fault which made my dramatic exit deeply embarrassing. As I stumbled down the stairs I discovered my biceps were quite solid. Then I asked my navigator which is the direction to the drug test area, he replied right this way sir. Once I got there I saw dozens of famous olympians. Then the DT chemist pounded the needle in my main vein which was in my  wrist and drained 3ml of my blood and took it for a test. She disappointedly walked right towards me, tuned her voice and said “unfortunately your blood came up positive which means you are now not in the Olympics 2016, you must leave now, security.”

I blundered down to the exit and threw a little tantrum and yelled “I did not take drugs you have to believe me.” I struggled to think who would want to give me steroids. Then I came up with a theory and that was to call in a meeting with everyone I was with before I arrived at Rio. Then I thought it could be the person that handed me my pancakes. So I said to myself I must avenge my career. Once all of them arrive I asked for a private meeting with the waiter inside the jet. I irritated him untill he would tell the truth, but unfortunately I couldn't come up with anything else so I release him and sent everybody home.

I took a seat and sighed and I said “ I am missing something I just got to think? Ohh I got it the cameras operating in the jet.

I ask the tech professional to look into the cameras codes for 5 hours ago. He takes a look and discovered he did shatter drugs inside your pancakes. I took this convincing evidence to Judge “James” to prove that I did not take steroids to diminish my strength. They caught the waiter and took him to jail. Then I got told that I am still competing in the Rio Olympics 2016 and in 15 minutes the 100m sprint will start. On your marks, Get set, Go!! I sprint as fast as I was capable to and finished 1st even though some people jumped the gun, I also made a world record. I made history that day.

Taking shelter

As Dylan was searching for food he heard a loud rumble echoing around the whole rain forest, rattling the trees which surprised every animal in the forest. That was a sign for Dylan to get set for the rain so he tugged a large leaf off a fossil tree. He comfortably sat on a stump branch.

As soon as the rain started his companions shot off somewhere in the rainforest also looking for shelter. Dylan tucked his legs beneath the silhouette of the large leaf protecting his feet and arms. He gripped his hand around the stem of the leaf. The rain was toppling on the large leaf like impatient fingers. As it kept raining his grip got looser and looser so he, selected a branch above him so he can stick his leaf on it using sap. Then suddenly Sssssshhhhhh a lightning struck a nearby tree.

Dylan was so frightened he fell off the tree damaging his shoulder, which made him weaker for him to feed his companions. He quickly climbed back up the tree and sat down. He gave the leaf more grip so it would not collapse as he was going to sleep. A sunrise later he woke up waiting for his companions to arrive.

When he woke up he looked at the beautiful scenery. The sun was scorching hot, it was blazing in Dylan's eyes. A few minutes later his companions came looking like they were hungry so Dylan went looking for food.

Estimating corn

Estimating corn

This morning my group and I had to estimate and find the actual of a cob. Mrs Ramkalawan gave each group a piece of corn. She told us to estimate how much husk there was on the piece of corn that Mrs Ramkalawan gave us. My group and I agreed that the number of husk was 8. Then we had to find the actual of the husk. We started to gently tear each husk off the cob. The actual we got was 8. I was happy that our group were good at estimation. Then we had to estimate the silk and then find actual. After that we had to count the kernels on the corn. I had a very great time working the estimation of the cob and finding out the actual of the cob.

Memories with my mum

                                    Memories with my mum

Well it’s nearly going to be mother's day. I think of getting her something she deserves for the happy memories and fun moments we had in the the past and in recent times. I just can’t stop thinking of all the memories we had, like when I went to my first rugby game, my parents wedding, the day I could walk and the most important memory in my life is when my brother arrived.

We had a enjoyable family time. The fun moments I had was when I learnt how to ride a bike, my 5 birthday and my first time at school. The bad moments and memories was when my mum got very sick she had to go hospital and when my brother had to get his first Immunization ingestion. Sometimes I got a lot of hidings but those hidings were for reasons. Well now I have overcame those bad moments and now I am making new lovable memories.

Sometimes I muck up in life and then I go back to my usually me. I use to get into fights in the past but I now am just a usual boy playing with my friends trying to get a good education. When I grow up my mum wants me to go UNIVERSITY and then be a lawyer, but my dad tells me to be whatever I want to be but find a good job that will pay your bills. Now I know that she loves me for who I am.  I love my mum and I will never stop loving her.

Animorphs

Animorphs 14/8/15

At school I have been reading this fabulous book. It is called animorphs. Animorphs is about humans evolving into vicious creatures. The creatures that they can turn into is a bear, alien, tiger, gorilla and a crazy pilot. I like this book because it is a very entertaining story about how they got their powers. Pr. S. Jeff injected them with an humanimal fluid.