Aloha mai e Huntah, The first thing about your poem that caught my attention was your title. It reminded me of my piece of writing so I wanted to compare a story to a poem. While I read a few more sentences I started to slowly drift away from your poem.
When I was reading your poem I was expecting precise adjectives but well done though, you would be a very good poet maybe poems are just not my taste in Writing.By the way, have you really learnt from your mistakes?
I really delighted in reading your blog post. I had a similar experience to this but I broke my iPad aswell. Don't worry you're not the first person millions of people all around the world break their phone in a minute. How did it break?
Ki ora Huntah, If I didn't learn from my mistakes then how would I be able to spell words in this comment correctly? Do you get it? Anyways yes I have and I am currently waiting for more mistakes to learn from.
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Aloha mai e Huntah,
The first thing about your poem that caught my attention was your title. It reminded me of my piece of writing so I wanted to compare a story to a poem. While I read a few more sentences I started to slowly drift away from your poem.
When I was reading your poem I was expecting precise adjectives but well done though, you would be a very good poet maybe poems are just not my taste in Writing.By the way, have you really learnt from your mistakes?
Aloha mai e Huntah
I really delighted in reading your blog post. I had a similar experience to this but I broke my iPad aswell. Don't worry you're not the first person millions of people all around the world break their phone in a minute. How did it break?
Talofa lava Alicia
Yes of course I did because if I didn't then I will always regret it. Have you learnt from your mistakes?
Kia ora Harrison
It's just my typical brother getting angry at a video game because he lost. How many more mistakes have you made?
Ki ora Huntah,
If I didn't learn from my mistakes then how would I be able to spell words in this comment correctly? Do you get it? Anyways yes I have and I am currently waiting for more mistakes to learn from.
Kia*
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