Hey Huntah Your writing was really good that is really competitive because how you have shared your feeling. But you have made two mistakes because I really wonder were Room 10 was maybe you got the order wrong and how you spelled centre but the correct word was center. Plus maybe next time you might want to use expensive words like how you said good you should use amazing and fun maybe joyful exciting all of those kind of words.
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Hey Huntah
Your writing was really good that is really competitive because how you have shared your feeling. But you have made two mistakes because I really wonder were Room 10 was maybe you got the order wrong and how you spelled centre but the correct word was center. Plus maybe next time you might want to use expensive words like how you said good you should use amazing and fun maybe joyful exciting all of those kind of words.
Hi huntah
Your writing is good and I like how you told us what happend and what you did you did well and how you shared your feelings.
Keep it up.
Hi huntah
Your writing is good and I like how you told us what happend and what you did you did well and how you shared your feelings.
Keep it up.
HI Huntah good writing you have here I hope you can do some more next time.
Which parts of skipping do you think you mucked up at.
wow huntah that was a long story but brilliant work keep it up and i agree with angel use the word next time instead of good say amazing or fun . :)
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
Hi its me alicia that was a good story.
Hey huntah you've done a great story
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